Love me then leave me

by beyouplur   Jul 13, 2017


Love me then leave me,
First tell me im pretty..
Our cigarettes and candy,
Cold breeze it feels windy..
Fine give me your lust..
Yall never have mercy,
Make me think that you need me,
For real this time really.
I adjust and then trust,
My heart starts to combust.
Denying the truth
This is always temporarary..
Now hold my hand baby..
Look into my eyes, maybe
now maybe,
You see me, you love me..
No, your right im crazy,
Its never love its only lust.
Just love me then leave me,
Im no good for keeping,
Join the game it looks easy.

The snakes will be slithering.
Tell me you need me..
Tell me im pretty..
JUST LOVE ME THEN LEAVE ME

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  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney


    Judges comments

    "Love Me Then Leave Me" By beyouplur 7 points

    I thought I had made up my mind on this week's nominations and then I came across this at the last minute which caused me to re-evaluate my choices..

    This is a really strong piece that I think will resonate with many. It is never good to be in such a relationship like this but for so many this is simply the way of things.

    To put it out there for all to see is brave and commendable. The poem itself is incredibly well written and captivating with amazing visuals.

    Really enjoyed this (7)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Fantastic write!! Well done!! Love this!

  • 6 years ago

    by beyouplur

    Tysm:)))))

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    This is fantastic

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    This write is cool as hell. The pace is positively manic. Well done-

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