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by Michael Aug 23, 2017
Love, romance /
I drift aimlessly, through a valley floating, upon a shallow stream
The sombre moon; casts a shadow of emptiness,
a reminder of how I feel
..stretches the length of my misery;
plagued with the perpetual absence
of your love.
A drought; which I feel no stranger
to; but the pain wrenches my guts,
and is as close to you; as can I feel
within this vacancy
A void; that once filled the atmosphere;
which felt alive; with you.
The air; an aroma of fresh lavender
that you always bathed in,
and you would snuggle up
close to me.
I would breathe
...sensation through my lungs.
Your radiant personality; so rich and colourful,
like that of a rose; unfurling; bursting
with beauty; with warmth that
blossomed your affection.
Petals; brushed your
now there is not even
trickle of you; my throat
feels so dry!
The sparse moisture which now fills the air,
only dampens my spirit further,
as I sink down and lower through;
this desolate canyon; and the risk
I face of running aground, and
being stuck in this...
...haunted by the sound of my tears;
echoing as they rattle around
in my hollow heart.
by Dagmar Wilson
I so totally agree. Excellent write. Take care
Thank you Dagma
by Meena Krish
This is love wrapped in painful memory and unable
to let go because those lovely memories themselves become
a nightmare when the person we love leaves...heart wrenching
Well done on the HM!
Thank you Meena for your words, which are always deep with emotions
Definitely a master piece Michael
Thank you Em :)
This is wonderful Michael. I really enjoyed reading it - X
Thank you Miss Angela, I'm pleased you enjoyed reading :)x
Michael, beautiful, that's all, and I am so happy it's nominated.
Thank you Miss Brenda :)
by Augustus Black