Insight of a lifeless thought.

by DarkLight   Sep 7, 2017


I'm an apex,
broken from a leaf which soar with the winds,
through the stormy weathers of life,
driven away from the branch of a tree that bore no fruits,
yet I stand tall,
in hope to never be swept into the drainage of brokenness.
An insight of a lifelesss dream.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A stormy sort of a write, Shanky, but one I enjoyed.

    All the very best to you as ever,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Darklight
    I really enjoyed reading your piece, especially the line 'in hope to never be swept into the drainage of brokenness' such a powerful line, meaning a bitter end (to me.)

    Well done
    Michael :)

    • 8 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Micheal, I really appreciate your feedback, Thank you.

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Firstly, the theme was unique to me, very ironic actually that a lifeless thought would have an insight...hehe. I enjoyed reading thru its sentiments! Some deep writing here. :-)

    • 8 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Hello Mel, thanks for your words.

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