Valentine's day

by Ya----Na   Feb 13, 2018


Verse of a poem
Adorned with synonyms of love
Left on a piece of paper.
Emotions carved into the words or a
Nest woven with the silk of your dreams.
Tale of my tethered troubled heart
Inked with colors of your name.
Numb this endless pain of emptiness and
End it if you still smell the
Scent of my dying soul by writing our
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Destiny in between those stars
Across the sky made for
You and me, my love?

    report violation
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  • 6 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    A phenomenally done acrostic poem.
    The passion of love and poetry is very much alive within the lines of your poem even if the relationship portrayed here might have seen some dying embers to a previously lit flame, and it grabs me as a reader because of its slow and romantically hopeful pace. I, especially, love the way the poem has been concluded: with a question of hope.

  • 6 years ago

    by Hope

    Great poem

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Thank you so much Ms Meena, Ren, Brenda, Scott, micheal and naaz once again for nominating it.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    As I read it I saw a letter/card decorated for Valentine's
    Day but it holds the colors of feelings as decoration and heartfelt
    words...nice. Congrats on the Win!

    Thank you for the comment on my write...appreciate it.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Beautiful write! Congrats on the win :)

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