Daddy Told Me About You

by Bleu   Mar 25, 2018


Eight years old
Sitting on my daddies knee.
He said, "Baby girl, let me tell you
That love is like a tree."

Such a young age,
I was not too sure what he meant.
But as he spoke,
I got the hint.

"Love is like a tree,
when both sides try,
that tree stands tall and strong.
But let me tell you what happens when all of the
struggles are shoved to one side.

The tree snaps,
the weight it tries holding snaps it right in two.
Do not ever allow a man to
think that everything is all on you."

Love is like a tree, that stands tall and strong.
I thought I knew the answers all along.
But, it seems that daddy forgot one thing.
Even if both sides try,
there is still going to be pain.

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  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This. Is. Beautiful.

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Love is like a tree
    ^
    Love has many branches, this your daddy knows
    from a healthy branch a fruit or two will grow

    If the branch becomes a burden, there may be a sound
    as the unsupported limb falls unto the ground.

    • 5 years ago

      by Em (marmite)

      Mr D this should be made into a poem I'm starting to think you are a genius

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is beautiful. A lovely message.

    • 6 years ago

      by Bleu

      Thank you so much, sweetie!

  • 6 years ago

    by Maher

    The best thing I can say is that I agree. Well written with a solid message. Your dad is a wise man. Thanks for sharing this with us all :)

    • 6 years ago

      by Bleu

      He is definitely my Hero. Thank you so much!!

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