by Ya----Na Apr 16, 2018
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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It was yesterday |
by Mr. Darcy
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Shane, this is mind-glowingly good. Great metaphor and use of emotional colours. |
by Ya----Na
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Thank you so much Mr Darcy, Brenda, ben and kitty. |
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oh Shane ... a little baby sparrow heart wanting love ... this is soooo cute and sad all at the same time! I'm glad it's nominated :-) x |
by Brenda
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Shane, beautifully written. Sad but flows so well. Nicely done - |
by Ben Pickard
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A beautifully crafted and delicately written piece, Shane. Well done indeed. |