Lingering Confession

by Brise   May 1, 2018


Baby confess to me your addiction for my skin
I know you want me, I urge you to drink me in
Intoxicate yourself in my aching passion
Profess your thirsty greed in drunken actions

Abduct me and snatch the blush from my lips
Possess me till you're full of these poached slips
But keep me stolen to taste me in pinches
Because your ransom kills me in inches

Demonstrate to me your feverish longings
Paint me in colors of my bodys callings
Yet hold onto these scribbles of caresses
For these colored kisses I need your confession

Please baby just admit this craving for me
Dont hide it just dress it in flirtation I plea
Woo me in secrecy, let's abandon my dreams
Rip this fantasy and patch reality around the seams

After all you may stay silent though our desires starved
Without any confession you will leave our affair uncarved
Because we dont play with hearts just the illusion
That your confession will not lead us to ruin

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  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    If this guy had been resisting you Brise, I'm pretty sure this would break his resolve! Very sexy and brilliant imagery. I really enjoyed it. Well done! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you Kitty! I enjoy reading your comments. :)

  • 6 years ago

    by naaz

    Hi Brise, first of all, I want to request you please don't write such steamy poems. It's become hard for someone of my age to handle it. Seriously, it's for the first time I am giving my comments on something this hot.

    A poem based on sensual or secret love. Atmosphere is hot and humid. Tone is seductive. I have seen such visuals you described in second stanza only in movies. I just hope 'poached slips' is not what I am thinking right now.

    As poem says, you want your lover to admit that he loves you and you want him to quench his thirst by drinking love from every inch of your body. However, all you tried to tell him that how much you want him to have you in that moment, in the end everything, all those amorous emotions you felt just ruined. I guess that's what the last stanza all about.

    To be honest, Brise, I can't write much like I usually do, as much I want to for this poem because then it gonna make it even more seductive. But one thing I would like to say about your writing that you have an art of playing with words.
    Lines like...
    Rip this fantasy, your ransom kills me in inches or poached slips are very cleverly done.

    I thoroughly enjoyed it, nothing is wrong with this poem. I mean good choice of words with good rhyming. I wasn't going to nominate any poem this week but then I read this poem and I couldn't stop myself. I don't know why no one else before me nominated it.

    All the best!

    • 6 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you Naaz, I felt like this poem wasnt cohesive enough but reading your comment reassures me I'm heading the right way. And your critique is head on, you understood what I was trying to say, thank you again ;)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A well rhymed and seductive sort of write, Brise. Well done.

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you Ben ! Wasn't sure were I was going with this lol

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