You make me forget and I feel so free
as you whisper your words so softly to me
the hairs on my neck stand on end to receive
the trail of soft kisses on my skin you leave
a passionate promise of all that will be
my mind taking pause so willingly
reacting purely instinctively
a welcome emotional reprieve
you make me forget
the song of my flesh signals a plea
to scatter my mind exquisitely
to salve my stress and so relieve
my tension with the bliss that you weave
and even if only fleetingly ...
Oh wonderful, this was quite a refreshing piece to read — full of hope, joy and a beautiful, bright future — all mixed into a single piece of a difficult form, the rondeau. You have very beautifully penned this write and this is absolutely breathtaking. Hope to read many more cheerful pieces from you. Congratulations.
Loved it. Great rhyming with sensuous undertone this could be a lover, cat or a gentle breeze. It is beautifully written and open to much interpretation. A very clever piece well worth the nomination. Milly x