by Mark Jul 29, 2018
category :
Love, romance /
love is
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The nightfall smears a biding shade and plume |
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A beautifully written and captivating sonnet and your meter and flow are a joy to see. |
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Awesome write. All the very best to you. |
by Ben Pickard
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Great stuff, Mark. Quick note - line twelve has 9 syllables, there. |
by Ben Pickard
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scrub that - dual has two when I thought one! |
by Ren
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WOW! Amazing write! |
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Marky - Excellent.. I still dont know why you post when i cant nominte.. GRR |