by Paul Hirst Nov 14, 2018
category :
Fun, humor /
other
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As I slowly take off your top |
by D.
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Strong, vivid imagery. I must admit, the abundance of adjectives in the fourth line is a little jarring, but a stirring poem nonetheless |
by Paul Hirst
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Thank You |
by Michael
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Nice one Paul, I did one like this for my favourite tipple. |
by Paul Hirst
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Thank You |