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by Larry Chamberlin May 27, 2019
Love, romance /
now fallen apart.
Do not play forsaken
when it was you who left me.
The dawn calls you, go and be free.
If you return don’t bother to plea,
your place at my hearth will long be taken.
by Sive Klaas
a doleful poem with beautiful structure.
well done Larry.
by Milly Hayward
Congratulations on your win. Milly x
by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald
I love this form and your poem. A deserving win! :)
by - Mr. Darcy
I'm glad this formed piece won. Well done..
I'm not familiar with this form but it is captivating. Its very well written and loved the rhyming. Milly x
by Ben Pickard