Gone (rhymed etheree)

by Larry Chamberlin   May 27, 2019




Heart
broken
torn token
words unspoken
now fallen apart.
Do not play forsaken
when it was you who left me.
The dawn calls you, go and be free.
If you return don’t bother to plea,
your place at my hearth will long be taken.

    report violation
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  • 4 years ago

    by Sive Klaas

    a doleful poem with beautiful structure.

    well done Larry.

  • 4 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on your win. Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    I love this form and your poem. A deserving win! :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I'm glad this formed piece won. Well done..

  • 4 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I'm not familiar with this form but it is captivating. Its very well written and loved the rhyming. Milly x

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