by Milly Hayward   Jun 10, 2019

Mistress Jane
full of determination
made attempts
at some articulation
her aim was true
in her application
for a husbandly

She found the top man
high in his station
explained her need
for annihilation
decided death
by asphyxiation
would be better than

Boldly she gave
her authorisation
for murder in her
pushed to the end edge
of desperation
due to her husbands

With no hope of
A broken heart
full of condemnation
no more will she
bear this aggravation
soon now she'll have cause
for celebration

Suddenly there are
now complications
something wrong with
the communications
seemed twas down to her
now instead they've
paid him compensation


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  • 3 months ago

    by Daniel

    Hahaha this is great. Love the comic ending :) well done Milly!

  • 3 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    This is more like it, Milly.
    I love the rhyme and the dark sad twist at the end which felled me. X

  • 3 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Fabulous piece with a rhyming scheme that's extremely difficult to do but you pulled it off well, as always :)

  • 3 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    this my dear is cooler than a frogs dangly bits.

    loved the style and flow of it.

    • 3 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you :) I think it's going to be a little bit like marmite love it or hate it :)

  • 3 months ago

    by Vanesa

    Beautifully written! Thanks for sharing.

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