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by Adastra Jul 9, 2019
Friendship, family /
A kind word,
A comforting touch,
Knowing that always, someone would remember-
That you were still you underneath the pain.
It never stopped you from looking for ghosts
In empty clothes.
by Em (marmite)
This is me right now...
‘It never stopped you from looking for ghosts
In empty clothes.’
This line carries your poem effectively. This is short but evocative.
Well done. I hope to see more work from you!
by BOB GALLO
What are the empty cloths: Unwornones??
"That you were still you underneath the pain"
You are a real deal. Reading the first sentence I realized that in you. I hope you hang around or better, become more active.
by Maple Tree
by - Mr. Darcy