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by Kitty Cat Lady Sep 19, 2019
Love, romance /
Only pretty confetti was allowed to take flight
Dancing in the breeze of my carefree thoughts
Harmlessly they'd float and flutter about
No direction or destination sought
A custodian of my heavy pages
You restrained with weighty compassion and care
You kept the dark ink from seeping out
Not allowing it to spiral into my despair
But now whole tomes crash unbound
Swirling unmitigated, unwilling to abate
No more is your love a port in my storm
No longer are you my mind's paperweight.
by Meena Krish
An emotional write and the depth of the pain
is felt in your silent writing with imagery
to accompany it.
Congrats on the win, take care
by Kitty Cat Lady
Thanks so much Meena :-) x
Congratulations Miss Kitty, and a fine, albeit sad piece of well written poetry :) x
Thanks so much lovely, I'm really chuffed to have won :-) x
by Dagmar Wilson
I sense some sadness in this write but I also see strength. You also will make it through this black tunnel. Add to my favorite. Hugs
Thanks lovely Dagmar, I really appreciate your comments :-) x
by Ben Pickard
Well done, Kitty
There's some lovely but rather sad imagery throughout this, Kitty. I am genuinely sorry you are feeling so low at the moment.
Thanks Ben. I'm actually ok but started this a while ago when I was low and wanted to finish it. Thanks so much for your comments :-) x
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