I felt the current

by Skyfire   Feb 28, 2021


I moved like a ship
on the water
lithe
and low
buried in your waves

I pressed a finger to
your throat -
and then my lips

Peace settles warm in
my bones
and I shift,
riding the tide
of contentment
as your voice
rocks over me,
smooth
and light.

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  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    "...your voice
    rocks over me,
    smoothe
    and light."
    ^
    the juxtaposition of rocks and smooth (typo) is effective as it shows how powerfully this person 'rocks' your emotional state.

    Nice work.

    • 4 years ago

      by Skyfire

      Aha, thank you for the catch.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This really is a lovely write. 'Soothing' is the perfect adjective here, I think!

    Take care.

  • 4 years ago

    by M.Useless

    Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

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