Misconducted Evening (Reverse Etheree)

by Star   Mar 15, 2021


Emotions unfiltered, when a lonely
sunset forgot to unravel its
colorful hues. The somber sky
dulls herself after her moon
shies away. Congested
birds sing out of tune,
an ominous
night settles
within
her.

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  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nice form. Should 'dull' be dulls?

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      I think you’re right :)
      Thank you!

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Syllable count's all wrong, the wording's hopeless...
    Just joking. Love this.

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      You almost gave me a heart attack :p But for real if anything is wrong feel free to point it out , I will appreciate that. Im here to share and learn :)
      Thank you for reading Ben!

  • 3 years ago

    by Kyle

    Beautiful

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      Thanks!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Really lovely! I love the beautiful imagery :)

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      Thanks Keira :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Now this is like a dew drop or tear drop to me... just beautiful!

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      That’s why I chose reverse etheree instead of a normal etheree ^_^
      Thank you!

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