Right

I know what u mean..it was a great poem w/o a doubt keep writing!

Good poem keep it up 5/5

Oooh. I haven't seen a poem with
A
A
B
B

Format in a long time, and haven't commented on those poems in an even longer time!

Wow, for three stanzas this poem was really short and good, maybe you should think of making a counter-part to it, I don't know, it's really good. A few suggestions I could make is use proper grammer, like capitalizing your I's and capitalizing letters at the beginning of sentences, and using commas.

Nice write.

This is a moving poem! i'll enjoy reading more of yours! * bre bre *

Very good

timehealsallwounds*