Train

by Evi   Apr 26, 2023


Everything you love, everything you hate,
Goes away, out the window.
In a world where everyone screams loud,
You're trying to find peace in an ocean of noise.
Everything pushes you away,
But there's something keeping you here.
Headphones on your ears,
Tears on your cheeks.
Everything goes away, out the window.
Yet you're still here, on your seat.

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  • 8 months ago

    by Eros

    So lovely, Evi. It's direct and fresh, enjoyable to read and with nice contrasts of words, but my favourite aspect is the closing verses relating to the beginning line. ? Delightful work.

    • 8 months ago

      by Evi

      Thank you Eros <3
      Lovely name!

  • 11 months ago

    by Skyfire

    I like the picture you paint in this one!

    • 11 months ago

      by Evi

      Thank you <3

  • 11 months ago

    by Ink

    Oh I really like this poem! I love your voice in the narrative, very heartfelt, open and honest. I can totally relate to this feeling as I'm sure others would too. Regards Ink.

    • 11 months ago

      by Evi

      It really feels like life is passing us by very quickly. I'm glad someone can relate to this feeling as well.
      Thank you, Ink. <3

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