the final show

by Star   Jun 19, 2023


loud noises and flashing lights,
I try to keep them inside but I lose
myself to the kaleidoscope of colors
and pixie dust. reality is now captured
in an image within my memory
I lose senses, as time keeps exploding
right before my eyes.

I’ve only seen the end
but never the future.

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  • 10 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This poem is so profound, and even if I hadn't given the prompt lol, I could still interpret it as something far more significant than the prompt. The title immediately made me think of a death. Whether a death of a character, or a chapter in someone's life. I love how you phrased that you try to keep the noises inside. It made me think of altering ourselves to fit the mold, to fit society, or perhaps to not let what is running through our mind out. To not expose it to the world. But you finally let it out, and lose yourself to your memories un-bottled. Sorting through what is reality. I cannot get enough of those last two lines! It makes me think of so many things. When the concept of time escapes us, and perhaps we envision the end of this path in our life, but the future is still unknown. There is wonder in that, and anxiety, in knowing how things could end, or even doubting ourselves and never seeing anything through... but knowing that there could be a future. Just one we can't envision yet. One we can't dream up or assign memories to yet.

    Loved reading this and so happy to see a new post!

    • 10 months ago

      by Star

      I love how you can interpret all this from a small poem. And of course its more than just the prompt, the last two lines were lingering in my head before even writing or knowing of the prompt, maybe thats why you read more to it.

      Thank you for the awesome comment!