The Invisible Force

by HOLLY ARMER   Aug 4, 2004


You say that you love me,
you say that you care.
But when I'm around,
it's as if I'm not there.

I vowed I'd love you,
till my dying day.
It was your decision,
you didn't want to stay.

But I don't want to blame you
and it wasn't me.
So let's just say it was an
invisible force no one can see!

*Any vote/comments appreciated*

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  • 17 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Very good write, i loved the passion and tone of this poem. 1 of truth and light. 5*

  • 21 years ago

    by Silent

    Never let an old poem be forgotten.

  • 21 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    very nice! Short Sweet and to the point! Great job!

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