Chains of Insanity

by HOLLY ARMER   Aug 6, 2004


Shimmering images clutter my mind.
Sanity leaves me far behind.

I am left with feelings...un-felt.
The sun bearing down as I slowly melt.

I float away within the breeze.
Finding myself where no one sees.

I've lost things...I never had.
I gain nothing...being sad.

Madness swarms around my head.
I hear things...no one's said.

I look for answers...unfound.
Unbreakable chains keep me bound.

I lose the battle...left unfought.
As insanity consumes my every thought!

*Any vote/comments appreciated*

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  • 19 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    Madness swarms around my head.
    I hear things...no one's said.

    cool line

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin J

    Sounds like something I'd write. I like contradictory lines in peotry, "I've lost things...I never had", "I hear things...no one's said"....very cool ;)

    5 thumbs up from me!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    Nice and creepy

  • 19 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    compelling reading , 8/10 from me

    god speed

  • 19 years ago

    by nikki

    great work, i can relate, top stuff, nothing else left to say, everyones already said everything i wanna say so just ditto to everyone elses comments :P