The Clock In My Room

by Bryan   Aug 16, 2004


It's 11 past 11,
On the clock in my room.
Girl, I know you're up in heaven,
But I'll be dreaming of you soon.

It's raining tonight,
Or is that you crying.
Teardrops falling from the sky,
Girl, my heart is dying.

The moon is shining bright,
Or is that you smiling down.
Girl, I'll love you all my life,
Even though you're not around.

The radio is playing,
All these sad love songs.
Or is that your way of saying,
You'll love me while you're gone.

I'm getting tired baby,
I'll be dreaming of you soon.
It's 12 past 11,
On the clock in my room.

Girl, send your love from heaven,
I'll be dreaming of you soon.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    Wow that was amazing. Actually made me feel like crying. Very well written and heartbreaking.

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    This was tragically sweet!! Your talent truly mesmerizes me!! Thanks for sharing your poetry!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    I like this poem it was really different and i could relate, but also had that hidden element of saddness in the story rather than in the language - very creative nice work thanks for sharing and check out mine if you have a chance
    Much Luv Eirisa xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Liz Suffecool

    aww thats so cute I really liked it keep up your good work

  • 19 years ago

    by *Katie*

    That was an amazing poem.I'm sorry she's not wit u but that was so deep and she would be proud to have known and loved you. You have suchunique talent. Don't waste it! lots of love from katie xxxx

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