Second Chance in Heaven

by Unseen Exposure   Aug 25, 2004


You hear her scream,
But you just ignore,
As you push her further,
Onto the floor,
And as she bleeds,
You refuse to comprehend,
Her life will soon,
Come to an end,
And as she cries,
All you do is slap,
Knowing she's too weak,
To ever fight back,
When you hear her break,
More invitation to beat,
Then you scream at her,
Telling her she's cheap,
And as she finally falls,
You find a grin,
Feeling proud about,
That cut on her chin,
You walk away,
Forget to turn around,
The one who loved you,
Is dead on the ground,
She's lifeless now,
You crossed the line,
This beating wasn't like,
All those other times,
Guilt overtakes you,
As you come to realize,
All along you should have,
Paid attention to her cries,
Standing at her grave,
Just before the hearing,
You lay a single red rose,
Your eyes begin tearing,
Admitting to an addiction,
Resenting all your drinking,
Staring at her name on stone,
Your heart slowly sinking,
She's soaring up to heaven,
But she takes a passing glance,
Hating you for what you did,
But promising a second chance.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    WOW. Unbelievably good, just simply amazing, I loved the ending, I'm so speechless. Good job and keep it up :0)

  • 19 years ago

    by Shona

    hey, i loved that poem, twas great. keep writing :) ...but whats with tha "sorry its not so good" ...why would you write that? you obviously want praise + reussurance and sh-t. anyway, good job
    cya

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    OMG how can u say htat was bad?! that was pure talent! you are amazing katie! i love yourt work sooo much you have incredible talent :( please keep writing <333
    -Mortalidaga
    xxxtakecarexxx

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    Are you kidding? That was such a wonderful poem. Such power woven in the lines, I give it a five. The topic may be sad, but it's a really great peice. Nice job!

  • 19 years ago

    by nikki

    and as so many people have said, you should not be sorry, thankyou for sharing such a beautiful poem with us. great work.
    xnikkix