Your Choice (Suicide)

by Amy   Sep 10, 2004


You feel depressed
You feel left out
No one ever hears you
When you scream and shout

You cry in the dark
When your all alone
Hoping someone will save you
But your on your own

You hate the world
And everyone around
You cant seem to find happiness
Your on the edge of breaking down

So how will you do it
As you sit alone in fear
Knowing once you make ur choice
The future will be clear

Should you take the blade
And drag it across your wrists
Stain it with crimson blood
And fall into eternal bliss
Let the pain consume you
As you watch you blood fall
And your life fades away
You answer god's call

Or what about those pills
That lay next to your bed
Just take one too many
And u will visit, the city of the dead
A painless way out
From this life you cant take
As you drift into a sleep
From which you will never awake

Maybe you should jump
From that ledge outside
Pretend you can fly
What a peaceful way to die
Feel the breeze rustle
As you fall so fast
Then hit the ground hard
Your life now the past

Or even better still
Get a strong piece of rope
Stick your head in the noose
All cuz u couldn't cope
Feel it get tighter
Cutting off your air
Your vision gets cloudy
You give up in despair

You could take that knife
It's blade so sharp
Slice it across your throat
And watch your world get dark
As you struggle to breath
Watch your world fade
In a pool of your own blood
You silently lay

Another way to end this
Just pick up that deadly gun
Aim it so carefully
Never again will you see the sun
Dont be afraid
Now are you ready?
Pull the trigger
Keep it nice and steady

So many choices
Which one will you choose?
No matter what
In every outcome, you loose
You will get what you want
For your hate of this life
Will it be by pills?
Or maybe a knife

Its up to you
The decision is yours
By causing your death
You open up god's door
So think hard now
Which one will it be?
The choice you make
Will set your soul free

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  • 19 years ago

    by MeL JoY

    a little bit sick but brilliantly written!

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Okay - this poem itself was terrific...amazingly well written, emtional and descriptive - i commend you for that...however not taking away from the beauty of the poem itself...the message your giving to younger and depressed ppl (who often visit the sad/depression poems) i think is just wrong...just like alot of ppl commented on hmmm i wonder which one i should choose now - it sounds sort of like you are promoting suicide and i dont think thats very responsible of you at all ...i dont wanna sound mean and please im not bagging the talented poet that you obviously are... i just think you think twice about posting poems with such messages and the influences they may have on ppl reading them...anyways thats my opinion i hope you can work with it!

    Much Luv an please no hard feelings at all :o) Eirisa xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Richard Bottary

    Extremely well written. Kind of ironic though, because I'm now considering which one I should choose..........

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    that was an amazingly touching poem. The words ring true and as sad as it is...it was a wonderful story. Nicely portrayed. Jamie

  • 19 years ago

    by Kerri

    wow amy..that one does it...that was great...awesome i should say...keep up the great work
    maybe you could check some of mine out sometime...id like an opinion of a reall writer....
    Kerri