by Kayla Dearing Sep 20, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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Holding Hands, |
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aww...sounds like true love. Beautiful work. This one flows so well...esp the beginning. |
by Brookeღ
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Exellent poem showed such emotion I like that! Very well done! Take Care Brooke! |
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another great write...i'm enjoying reading ur poems...keep them coming....take care...FIVE>>> |
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smooth ending |
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Absolutely beautiful, Kayla! |