All Alone Here.

by Kayla Sonya Dearing   Oct 10, 2004


Here with a room full of people
But yet I'm alone
People smiling Dancing
Me, I'm sitting down,
Crying.

My friends having a great time.
I'm having the most awful time.
My best friend
Dances with my ex.

I don't say nothing,
I felt horrible.
Seeing her
Having her head on him.

Seeing my other friends
Having dates.
Some come by
ask me whats wrong.

I tell them nothing's wrong,
I just didn't want to ruin their night.
Or first homecoming
And I was all sucidel.

Don't know why though.
I was soo happy
I walked into the dance floor,
Saw my best friend.

We hanged out.
Then I sat down
And started feeling
All depressed.

So whats next?
Me dying?
I felt all alone here.
But yet I wasn't.

My friends were trying to get me happy.
I couldn't here them.
I felt cold.
I couldn't find the warmness.

I couldn't see the light
To the happiness
Tonight.

I couldn't see nothing.
I couldn't hear nothing.
I couldn't feel nothing.
So maybe tonight was nothing.

Or Maybe all tonight was me,
feeling all alone here.
On this most important night
Of my freshmen year.

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  • 19 years ago

    by David

    Whoa, that should be taboo, for best friends to even look at my x's
    Nice poem. As always you know how to deliver emotions, and visuals. Thank you for sharing, this poem really got me thinking.
    ~David

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    Hey, this is a very good poem, no rhyme but flow so well :) This is the kind of poem I would love to write but.... can't.... well, maybe one day :D Keep up with good work :) Take care.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ryan Schneider

    Kala you have NO right to say something like that b/c I offered to dance with you, you said no. You told Anna not to dance with me just because you were mad at me and you have NO right to say what you said in that poem because you had the opportunity to dance but refused.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashmore

    Kala! :'( This is so so sad. I dislike to read your work when its sad. I hate hearing your sad! This is ..just...wow your descriptive couldnt have been better. And it touched me deeply. You are a great writer. Continue Writing always. Love u loads, Jessica xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    see that's why i dont wanna go to the homecoming dance on the 16th. i was end up alone.

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