Suicide

This is lovely but sad to know. Keep writing.

weird how some of our darkess thoughts can be thrown down a piece of paper and felt so real yet infact there just a figment of our own imagination. Great Poem Nef, i gave you a 4. I thought it had a great message but i found the layout a bit distracting. I hope i don't offend you. I really enjoyed it though, can't wait to read some more.

Awww... I'm so sorry about your loss (if in fact this poem is true). It's so horrible when people think they have to end their lives... once again, I'm sorry. This was a very heart-felt poem. Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

THis was a very good poem. I know what you mean by a suicide poem just coming to you. It's intersting the way it works.
xxZoexx

That was beautiful how you expressed your feelings. Suicide does happen a lot these days and the population that has tried to commit suicide is very large. Good poem!