The Sun

by Nefarius   Oct 8, 2006


I am standing at the bay
In the beginning of the day
And like it has to come
I see the sun
Maybe this is sounding trite
Due to this moment and this sight
A musing has begun
And I see the sun
Is my life like it should be
But facing the reality
My thoughts now start to run
I see the sun
Neither is my name been made
Nor pain in me has been allayed
What is left, when I'm gone
And I see the sun
In this morning I have met
The sun
And the sun was red.

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  • 17 years ago

    by joern

    Sorry that i use a comment on your poem, but you have one of mine...girlie goo uses copy & paste for her comments. Bad behavior

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have meant something :)

    please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    Great use of symbolism.

  • 17 years ago

    by joern

    This poem i really like. But have you ever seen a red sun in the morning? I know about the symbolic meaning, refering to the end of life. And this is the main theme engaging the I narrator

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