A Promise That Can't Be Broken!!!

by Saravana Kumar S   Oct 14, 2004


The times spent with you never flies,
like a pain they have remained in my eyes,
i try to forget each and everything about you,
but i can't forget the love that is still so true

Holding each other hand,we made a promise,
to love one another until our demise,
even after breaking the promise that was made,
from my heart why don't you still fade.

For you,these promises might be just a game,
but why u choose to play that game in my name,
thinking what all you said was true,
this stupid heart is still in love with you.

I still put you in my dreams while i sleep,
in my wallet,your photo is always there to keep,
When i'm sad,i still call out your name,
thinking even you would also be doing the same.

All the moments spent with you i will always cherish,
till the day this mind,body and soul will perish,
there hasn't a single day where i haven't thanked god,
for bringing you and giving me more happiness than i had.

Promises are not just words given or taken,
they also have a heart that shouldn't be broken,
As tears fill my eyes,i look up into the heaven,
and ask myself why can't this promise be broken.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    I like this good good job

  • 19 years ago

    by Megha

    "For you,these promises might be just a game,
    but why u choose to play that game in my name,
    thinking what all you said was true,
    this stupid heart is still in love with you."
    all i can say is wow.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    you have a very extensicve vocabulary and it can be intelectual but at the same time....peaceful! you are very good at this poetry thing and this poem is truly awesome!
    lexi lou

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Full of passion and emotion great write

  • This poem made me literally heart broken.. A feeling like it really happened to me.. Thats a very true feeling.. The poem was so touching.. Thanks for th epoe. Take care, Trincy.