Underneath The Core

by Victoria   Oct 15, 2004


Death and sorrow
But no tomorrow
Like a flower it wilts
Suffocated within a quilt
Feelings of a lonely heart
Which cannot bear to part
Now the soil is the home
But all that was, is skeleton and bone

Hi could you tell me what you think of this poem because i think its weird!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy

    Now the soil is the home
    But all that was, is skeleton and bone
    These were really good lines to end a very short poem! I am impressed.

  • 19 years ago

    by Angel Sanctuary ©

    It's interesting.. And it's very dark.. I don't really understand it... But hey i'm very tired.. so maybe i missed it.. keep it up,, you have something here
    Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    i think its awesome! very good! i love how you paint pictures in the persons mind! hope to read more soon! keep in touch!
    lexi lou

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