Suicide (Version 1)

by Manda   Oct 25, 2004


Haven't you ever just wanted to die,
To commit suicide?
I know you have,
But -don't worry- so have I.

You can't look me straight in the eye,
And deny,
That you've ever tried.

Now let me explain this carefully,
And you'll see,
Just how much pain it relieves.

Take a knife from the drawer,
But don't take a few seconds or more.
Go in your room and lock your door.

Lift up the sleeve of your shirt,
Don't worry this won't hurt.
Take the knife and slide it East to West,
On my count you'll push down,
But don't make a single sound.

You wouldn't want them to know,
For they wouldn't understand,
Why you were holding a knife in your hand.

As t he blood oozes from the cut,
All your pain flows out with it, but,
Make sure to hide everything,
For it reveals your pain and suffering.

I won't tell,
I promise,
And to be honest,
I think this life is Living Hell.

[This is actually the first version of my Poem Suicide. Hope you like this Poem, too.]

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  • 19 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    WOW. I really like this poem!! One thing tho...I think in the 4th stanza there may be a typo in the 3rd line. But it's great!

  • 19 years ago

    by miss scooby

    Wow this had alot of emotion to it.....i really love this poem...i think this is my favorite right now...u really now how to reach someone with your words and never question if you are a bad poet because i am telling you the honest to God truth, u are really gifted and if you stick with ur writing i think u could really go somewhere with it...