Touching De-void

Whether about a birth from the creative process or not, I still I feel like I should hand you a cigar and pat you on the back. Should I? There's something almost conflicted about the poem, and perhaps that's why I enjoy it a great deal.

ooo haha nevermind, i suppose yuo already explained what it was about...now i am embarassed that I viewed it wrong, o well. Still, excellent use of metaphor and symbolism. I do admire this piece

Beautiful. If i am not mistaken it is about a child growing up? or at least a metaphor of it, either way very well written.
I loved your format, creating a rhythm to the poem that specified the more in depth and meaningful lines
I loved your metaphors and comparisons. They really added an understanding and deeperaspect to the piece. Great job

BTW i gave it a 4 :) nice job

its like my poem rebirth

pretty good i don't understand why you ended one line with flutter
and started the next w/ ing

was that on purpose?