Death

by SHYSTY23KO   Nov 17, 2004


Suicide victims end thier life because drugs and mostly because never ending strife.
Others are murdered by a weapon like a gun, and those who murder, murder for fun.
Others dies from sickness and disease, hoping it'll stop but it never does cease.
Some are strangled by a rope, it won't be the ending is my hope.
Old age takes its victims slow, knowing not when they'll go.
Death to me, as I survive, will not be fun but a sheer surprise.

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  • 19 years ago

    by cimez

    gd point. gd topic, gd poem...wel dun

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    Great poem. And thank you for the comments on my poems :-D. Keep up the writing and never stop. Writing is very important to me and I will always stand up for it :-D

  • 19 years ago

    by Kara !

    I actually really like this poem. I'm not sure what it is exactly, but there's something really powerful about the message.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy

    it has a great point, and topic...well done and put together, but honestly, not to be rude, just a comment, vocabulary can really make a poem so intense...not that mine is huge, im jsut saying, but very good...
    lee nicole

  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy

    it has a great point, and topic...well done and put together, but honestly, not to be rude, just a comment, vocabulary can really make a poem so intense...not that mine is huge, im jsut saying, but very good...
    lee nicole

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