Our Love

by Shana   Dec 9, 2004


Our love is passion
An undying flame
Never to be rationed
Your love is so tame

Our love is not lust
Neither is it boring
Never to collect dust
Your love is so louring

Our love is pure delight
You are meant to be with me
Never will we fight
To my heart, you have the key

Our love we do not deny
We don't pretend
Never to die
It will not end

Our love is so real
Not at all fake
Never to conceal
I think of you everyday I wake

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  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    good one. 5/5 keep it up**

    thanks for reading my poems . means alot to me~!!~
    xoxoxox
    nida

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Very nice idea behind this, however I don't think It's one of your strongest writes.
    Alot of the lines, however powerful they were, sounded like they were used just because they rhymed and not because It's purely how you felt.
    I'm sorry if you don't agree or if I've offended you. It's just my opinion.
    Take care of yourself.
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Excellent poem, very well worded. Take care and Keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I liked you poem it's very true!!

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