Surrounded by My Blood and Tears

by HeAvENLy UniQue   Dec 17, 2004

I've dropped down to my knees,
Fallen face down to the floor,
Head tilted to the side,
I can't take this anymore...

I shut my eyes.
So that no more tears will stream down.
But they keep finding their way out,
And I can't control this frown.

I'm becoming breathless,
Can't stop thinking of my poor life...
I've turn my body facing up,
And grab my hidden knife.

I start cutting...
Then I close my eyes real tight,
My arms hugging my own body.
Wishing things could be al right.

I get chills,
I'm feeling so cold,
Nothing here but a hard floor.
No one here to hold.

Waiting to see if someone will appear,
So blinded by my own tears.
Waiting for that angel, I want to be saved.
Is their hope for my life or is it too late?

Now as I think and slowly realize,

I am surrounded by all the tears I've shed.
I'm surrounded by all the blood I've bled.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by nandini

    hey take care of urself...but good writing here.....keep smiling!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    oh my gosh this poems so sad i hope ur life gets better and to dont have to resort to cutting like this i feel u gurl, luv ¤SaM¤

  • 16 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    Great job cyn!!!!! ;)
    take care!! be safe!!! stay strong!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cimara

    omg, amazing. wow, im totally speechless!!xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by HeAvENLy UniQue

    LOL.. dora.. lol.. u funny!! but yeah... thanx 4 showing the love commenting... you know I do it right back!... and you keep up your good work too!!

    take care !!!


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