Seconds to Angels

I really like this poem, it's just how things in life go so fast that it's hard to tell what exactly happened at first. your poem showed that beautifull, even though i knew what happened. but i loved the flow and speed this poem actually went at.

thanks for the comment as well, i've been working on that line that you mentioned.

~Jacklyn

This is different... but really good.

Short and sweet! you could read it so fast that it actually seemed like a flash. nice talent. keep it up!

Wow! that was amazing...for being short it had tons of power throughout the whole thing...it was brialliant, unigue and wonderful!! 5/5

That was a very interesting poem but it was very good !!!!! xoxoo linda xoxoxo