10 Last Seconds

by ShatteredAngel   Jan 3, 2005


10 last seconds to change my mind
9 failed attempts to press rewind
8 little reasons to let go of it all
7 more seconds to make one last fall
6 drops of blood a crimson shade
5 fingers grip the blade
4 tears drip from my eye
3 reasons to tell one last lie
2 final seconds to say i love you
1 last thought...if only you knew

© ShatteredAngel 2005

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  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow.. Its unique, and very well written. I loved the rhyme scheme, it worked really well, and wasn't forced. Its a powerful write, very intense and emotional. Flows well throughout the entire poem also. I really enjoyed the read. Great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Em

    It's short and lovely

  • 17 years ago

    by tragic

    Wow that was intense! i use to use this site a lot cause i had a lot going on in my life so i had a lot to say/express and now i go on again from time to time kinda like you and i was just skimming through some old comments and i found yours from my poem "behind these brown eyes" and i love what u said... im sorry if it was a long time ago but really im glad someone else feels that way and it just makes me feel a whole lot better that the events that happened... happened when it did instead of later on in life anyway lol sorry im rambling

    PEACE

  • 19 years ago

    by ShatteredAngel

    Thanks =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Incognito

    Wow that was great

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