Whisper

by xRachelx   Jan 4, 2005


I stand on top of a mountain,
And whisper your name.
Asking 'Why wont you come back to me?',
But maybe I'm to blame....

I stand in the middle of a field,
And wish that you'll come back.
I close my eyes and wish so hard,
Cause without you life is black.

I swim to the center of a lake,
And pray that you'll return here.
But even now I know the answer,
I've got to let you go, thats clear.

I run among the trees in a park,
And think all about you.
Every detail is savored in my mind,
I know our love was true.

I walk along a foot path,
And wonder why you did it.
The day you put the gun to your head,
And said the words 'I Quit'

So I walk to the top of a building,
I know its what I must do.
I jump and while I'm flying,
I know Ill be back with you...

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  • 19 years ago

    by CritiX

    Great poem ! Keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    awww wow i'm speechless...
    Love Always,
    Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by .x.PorteR.x.

    I really like this... but with this stanza:

    I swim to the center of a lake,
    And pray that you'll return here.
    But even now I know the answer,
    I've got to let you go, thats clear.

    I thought it sounded like a bit of a forced rhyme. Asides from that, well done!

    xx, PorteR

  • 19 years ago

    by Tara

    Excellent poem.....you show emotions well in your words. Keep up the great work!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ*KiM*ღ

    Wow. I love all your quotes! keep writing hun there all really good! xXx