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by ..::Angel of your darkness::.. Jan 14, 2005
Sadness, depression /
I guess its time my friend
To now say good bye
I hold my head up high
And Iâ€™ll be brave
And try not to cry
But itâ€™s hard you know
Youâ€™ve been my friend for so long
You where always here for me
When things went wrong
And now youâ€™re gone
I wonâ€™t forget you
Have you already forgot me?
Will I meet you again?
Oh well, in time weâ€™ll see
I hope you know
You where the best friend in the world to me
threw it all, we remind friends
And thatâ€™s a friendship that never ends
though donâ€™t want to say goodbye
Youâ€™re too young to go and die
Oh please donâ€™t leave
And let me grieve
Stay by my side
Morning and night
Guide me in darkness
when Iâ€™ve lost my light
Just donâ€™t go
Stall just a little while
Without you, Iâ€™ll forget how to smile
Itâ€™s not gonna be the same with out you
What will I do?
I love you, my dearest friend
I love you till my own life comes to an end
I must leave you now
I'm really trying not to cry
One last thing
Good bye~~Please, if you have read this poem can you leave a comment, whether good or bad I would love to hear from you all on what you think of it~~
by Jayden Mackwell
This one reminds me of my best friend Brad. Could you please go read my poem For Brad? I'd really appericate it.
That reminds me about my past friendships when I had 2 say good-bye. 5 thumbs ^^^^^
Wow! girl i love ur work! u just have a way w/ words that touches me in some way. 5/5
hon another touching poem.
you got a line that needs fixed hon.
( It's not gonna me the same with you)
you mean (be the same with out you) yes?
Oh it was 5/5
This is some deep stuff, i loved it, keep it up, all i can see to improve is the form, you got the writing down!
If u got some time i would love to have some comments and votes on mine.