25 cent execution

by Austin   Jan 23, 2005


It was a 25 cent execution
Forged by her tears
and committed by her fears
His life was ended on Valentines day
He never said he loved her
And never said he cared
Maybe now she says
Her love will be shared
withsome one who actually deserves her
and treats her right
some one who she feels
she can sleep with at night
but everytime she sleeps
and everytime she dreams
she sees his face
and hears his screams
all from a 25 cent execution

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    Are you on some medication we all should be aware of? Ok i took alook at one of yours before and now I am truely perplexed. You had no flow and it was very choppy and I had no idea where the poem was going. OK maybe I need to drink more coffee before reading your work. You could have potential but I don't know where you want to go with it. Please help me find the poem that you excell at because I feel like I grasping at straws. Read set free. The message in it carries through the peice and you can understand from beginning to middle and end. Please let me know what you think.

    Robert

  • 19 years ago

    by Austin

    Umm im not sure if you were saying it was awsome or not but thank you for the idea

  • 19 years ago

    by xeag

    good poem im not sure i get the 25 cent thing though

  • 19 years ago

    by Lyss is dead

    you are such an amazing writer. all mine are about death, and the same thing. I wish I could write liek you could. read some of mine if u wanna. You can IM me at lyssxo928
    I'd love to hear from you....
    alyssa

  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    very original, i like that!
    kt

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