Red Dressed Model

by Krete   Jan 25, 2005


Shes laying there,
the model for red.

Dressed light,
lingerie night.

The Cello plays,
melancholy malaise.

Silence echoes,
keen vibrations,
mellow out her daze.

As eyes exploding,
grow to overbearing,
tears all sharing.

Somethings growing deep inside,
hidden all around by lies.
Moments lurking in her mind,
tears expose her hidden hide.

Wonders of why and when,
cluttered subjects on the bed.

Tears extolled as visions roll.
Overbearing news polls.

Abortion, or Life?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Priscilla

    great job man! I love ur work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Excellent, very powerful poem.
    Take care,
    Rachelxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    wow, that was so amazing!! i liked how the whole poem and the end lines portrayed different things, i gotta reread this, i absolutely love it *5

    God Bless
    Love Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    great poem, the last line just gives the poem a whole new meaning, it was well written

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    An excellent poem! Sorry it took me so long to comment. :-\ Keep up the great work & take care!

    God bless you! <3

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