by Kalika Jan 27, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Now your gone, |
by David
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Hey, This peom is written really well i like the style and how it flows... i also relate so much to it, its kinda scary how when i read your poems how similar my feelings are... i hope u continue to write, but i also hope you will feel happier one day. Thank you for sharing that poem |
by fakesmile
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Awesome poem!!! |
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Very expressive peice,, the feelings were very clear. i like the positive feeling towards the end, the idea of hope that comes in, that is very well done. |
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I like the positive end to this poem. We all can understand that life is hard, and it makes since to write about it, I just like how you had a bit of a light at the end of all the darkness, it takes a strong prospective on life and a talent for writing to make that work out well. Nice poem love. |
by Lydia O
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Excellent! This was well written and well expressed. You did a great job here in describing the torment left from a lost love. |