Society

by Jacob Perry   Jan 27, 2005


Society

Explosive Comatose
An addictive neurosis
Narcissism runs rampant
Masochistic people are the norm
And we all have to feel their scorn
Those who are sadistic are the only who succeed
The ones who kill
Are the ones who feed

Psychobabble bullshit explains it all away
How long will it take for everyone to pay?
I await the day they all wake up
And see their labors fruits
The death
The mind pollution
And all the hurtful truth

Disposable
Reusable
Infusible
Unable to concept refusal
Mindless puppets on a string
Military privets marching in a line
A dead society w/o any hope
Might as well hang us on a rope
let our feet dangle
And let us fall into hell
thats the only place our society deserves to dwell

©jacob

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  • 17 years ago

    by PS

    Hah you are right. i love it. it makes me smile in a sickening way. society sucks these days. and your poem puts is fabulously. the style is different but affective and i would pick parts out that i liked but i would be recopying the entire poem. awesome job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I really liked the use of vocab in this poem because it means that somebody finally doesn't want to stick to the everyday words we're used to. Plus it makes us think or *pulls out a dictionary*
    For some reason I felt like I could feel a certain beat to the words almost like you can put a bit of music to them. The way you have the words organized made it all seem to fit into this one puzzle poem. I liked the short lines in between the long ones as well. It added a nice effect.

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    *Pulls out the dictionary*... Jacob...HUGE WORDS! lol I love it cause it expands my vocabulary and gets me tothink about the context and their meanings!

    I loveeeeeee
    Explosive Comatose
    An addictive neurosis
    Narcissism runs rampant

    Brillant... I love it! lol keep it up! I'm so happy I read this cause I can see the change in your writing w00t lol sex-illent

    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Stellar write
    ~HazE

  • 18 years ago

    by Katran

    cool poem. altho there were a few words i wasn quite sure of their meaning, i got your message and i think the same kinda things everyday. keep writing, ur poems r extraordinary.