Good bye this year

by R F   Jan 29, 2005


Sitting all alone
its the last day of the year
sad days are gone
new days are near

Sitting all alone
trying to find some words to say
how long and cruel this year had been all the way

hours are few untill this new year appear
trying to hide those feelings of fear
wondering how could it be this mystery year

alone finding time to be
trying to write those last notes i see
feelings so strange are about to tee
trying to know what would it mean to me

missing people, praying for them
wishing they could be here
they're watching me from heaven
whispering i love you dear

time is ticking ..ticking away
Oh goodbye this year ,nothing's left to say !

Copyright ©2005 Rua Francis

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    This is extremely good! You have a beautiful gift Rua! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Jay27

    Hi Rua,

    First of all, thank you for taking the time to comment on my poems, and of course, the kind words you sent my way were appreciated.

    I too enjoy your poetry, they are free and full of honesty.

    This one would be one of my favourites for sure.

    Take care,

    Jay

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Good poem, i liked it, i actually could sit down and read it. I don't do that often.

    Very well done.

    Five/Five

    P.S. If you want to know about my poem "Fogotten Soldier" and the meaning behind it, you should check it again i posted all of the metaphores and so forth that are there on the page. Thanks for all your comments and votes

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~Nice poem, this one too, Rua. Lovely use of rhyme in this one. Its good you managed to write in time. God bless you.
    ~take care, 5! always believe in love, amit ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by R F

    my favorite part is :
    missing people praying for them
    wishing they may be here
    knowing that they're watching us from heaven
    whispering i love you dear

    it was dedicated for my sister and my loevly grampa that i mis soo much,coz a've always wished that they would be with mee in such times! I LOVE You Sis
    I LOVE You Grampa !!

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