by Ashleigh Skye Feb 4, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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You see her standing in the shadows, |
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Wow...I can actually picture the scene...and it's creepy...yeah...you have so much imagination...and it's good. |
by Hayley Marie
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omg... this is awesome!!!! brilliant write!! keep up the good work!! |
by TrUtH hUrTs
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Just like the crack of a bat. |
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hm i think a good name would be 'that girl' or 'that little girl' or 'her' or 'she' whatever the names your choice but as for the poem nice work! its really poetic and creative i really liked it you seem really talented! brilliant poem! 5/5 |
by creasy
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this was...great!! nice job!! keep it up!! :) |