Dizzy

by Tamara Talcott   Feb 9, 2005


Life is like spinning in circles,
Everything may be blurry,
But your fine until u stop.

Thats when u fall over
And get sick.
Thats when the lights go out,
And feelings are numb.

Thats when the happiness is no longer a choice,
But a receipt for your
Eternal ending.

Visions of your life
And what may have been,
Spin Above your head
Collaborating with your thoughts
And dreams

You remember every thing
You have ever done.
And think of those
Of which you have
Yet to accomplish.

The lids of your eyes
Creep shut
And every thing around u
Ceases.
It is all over there is
NO turning back.
The end is coming

Blankness seeps
Into your mind
Slowly filling
Your body.
From head to toe.

The cup is not half empty
Nor half full.
There is simply
Nothing left in the cup.

Spinning
Blurriness
Falling
Numbness
Creeping shut
Blank
Empty...
The End

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  • 19 years ago

    by Alyssa

    i hated it sorry

  • 19 years ago

    by chibi

    i hate how life stops so soon as it begins. at least i can say what i want without people lieing to me all the time. great poem. i can relate to this too.