Valentines Day

Yeah definatly not your best work at all

I sit here alone.
I wish I could say,
I wish I'd pick up that phone.

you wish you could say what? it sounds like your saying i wish i could say i wish id pick up the phone you can say that....

thought I'd give it to you,
But then I thought again.
Is this something I should do?
Would I lose you?

the whole piece is about you not having him so its not like you can actualllly lose him...

i didnt like this sorry if im too honest but imma give it a 3

Excellent poem! I relate to this a lot. I understand the pain you feel, and the talent you possess is incredible. Very well done! Your diction, imagery and structure are all flawless. You do keep the reader's attention despite the length of your work. Very well done, once again!

Awwl.. i absolutly loved this one.. its sad that you were alone on valentines day.. but i think you should have given him that valentine! it mite have made a difference.. well you never know.. don't wonder about the past though! well anyways.. i hope everything worked out and im sorry it took me soo long to respond.. all of your poems were excellent and thanks for the comments nice job. xox take care xox.

Oh wow, this is deep. It's sweet and moves the heart. Good choice of words.

Hey i can totally relate to this poem, tis really good well done
take care xxxx
p.s fanks for the comment on mine xxxx