My Heart Bleeds

by Carmen   Feb 14, 2005


The razor cuts my skin,
This is a horrible sin.
I know I shouldn't,
I thought I couldn't.

My tears are falling down,
My smile turned to a frown.
When you left me,
My heart started to bleed.

This pain is killing me,
My eyes can barely see.
But the pain you left first,
Was most definitely the worst.

My family will be upset,
My goals never being met.
My friends will wonder why,
Did they even try?

My life is almost finished,
The light is almost diminished.
My body is going numb,
My soul barely bigger than a crumb.

My existence ended this September,
And I just want you to remember;
When you left me,
My heart started to bleed.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Awsome poem. it was so deep and it really touched me. very well written.i loved your use of words and the rhyming. 5/5 keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I liked this a lot another 5/5 your rhyming was almost all exact, me and bleed don't rhyme but i guess thats okay, i loved your vocab in this one awesome

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Hmm, already commented on this one...

  • 18 years ago

    by Kymberly

    Awsome poem! Good flow and comparison!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    What can I say? It was really a great poem. It was written well and it flows very well. True emotion shows!!=) Great work!!!=) 5/5

    Can u plz comment on my poem "My Story" thanks!!!=)