Dying in decay

by Hurtingsoul   Feb 25, 2005


My tears are the rain
my blood is a rose
a knife is my pain
an abandoned house is my soul

My heart is a stone
my fear took over
my mind has been left alone
and darkness made me sober

My thoughts are filled with strife
my body is scarred with wounds
soon i will have no life
and pain is all Ive found

my anger is joining rage
my happiness left me
all i got is in a cage
and I'm still hoping one day i will be free

my ears hear the sound of me screaming
i only wish i were dreaming
my fate is fading away
and the only dream i got is me dying in decay

*its kinda of bad just needed to let it out please rate and comment*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    A really nice expressing of feelings. It really gives a feeling of despair. The flow is nice and so are the rhymes. a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Gd

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    That was not bad at all hun!!
    wow...god so true..i'm not sure if you were serious about having those dreams, but i have them too..
    chin up hun, thanks for the comment xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    you should stop saying that its bad, everyone loves this poem! You have talent hun, keep on writing this kinda beautiful and very good poems. 5/5 and no less.
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    the first stanza is perfect!! I'm in love with it...best damn dark poem I've read in a while!! very impressed!! -5!

    keep in touch!

    With love,
    Heather.

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