Standing In The Rain~

by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи   Feb 25, 2005


I've written lot's of poems, some hopeful and some sad,
But lately all that comes to mind is everything gone bad.
I always try to hide it, but still these thoughts are real,
And everyday it's harder to escape from what I feel.
I wake up every morning, pretending I forgot,
But still the rain continues, and I realize I have not.
Yet worse things happen everyday, so how can I complain?
I guess I'll just keep standing here, standing in the rain.

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  • 19 years ago

    by sara

    you did a great job on this poem i love it 5/5 keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Joann

    wow...i li8ked this a lot! 5/5 excellent job--Joann ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by Rashelle

    Wow im definitly adding you to my faovrites you are a very talented writter

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    i feel the same *big hug*, keep on writin' i enjoy your poems =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    A very well written poem. I liked it. It was pretty descriptive and had a lot of flow. Keep it up.